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« on: April 21, 2008, 12:27 »

Hi Guys,

Here is my store, feedback guys whether it good or bad i want to Know. lam still working on it.

http://www.romantichoteldeals.com

The products are amazon and ebay based
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« Reply #1 on: April 21, 2008, 20:51 »

Hi piusvic

One suggestion to consider to make your categories a little cleaner looking (and more distinctive) would be to eliminate some of the wording---

example---

Vacation Packages
[INDENT]Caribbean
Florida
Hawaii
Las Vegas
etc.
[/INDENT]
Vacation Rentals
[INDENT]California
Florida
Hawaii
etc.
[/INDENT]

As I look at the categories now, I initially "see" the following---

Vacation Packages
Packages Caribbean Vacation
Packages Florida Vacation
Packages Hawaii Vacation
   etc.

As I look closer, I realize that you are really talking about vacation packages in each of those places.  Eliminating some of the redundant wording might make it cleaner and more clear.

This is just an opinion.

Thanks.

Larry
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« Reply #2 on: April 22, 2008, 17:11 »

Hi Larry,

thanks for your suggestions, l didn't realize that. I will make the changes ASAP.

I really appreciate that.

Pius
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« Reply #3 on: July 04, 2008, 02:02 »

Changed over to BANS?
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« Reply #4 on: July 24, 2008, 01:58 »

piusvic,

One of the best ways to succeed online is to come up with your own original content and not copy other people's stores as you've done to mine here http://www.traveldealauctions.com/

You have similar look, header and even some copied content, please try to be original.

Alan
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